All Comments on 'Brother and Sister No More'

Loved it. needs a little more attention to spelling in a couple areas but overall fantastic. can't wait to hear more about these two....maybe a child to solidify their love?

great attention to detail. One of the best short story writers i've ever read.

This was so hot and so fast and so passionate that I'm exhausted . Thanks for a great story . Let them go on holiday together and experiment on each other .

This one is one the best stories i have ever read .. awesome work buddy .. great ..

what the fuck you left us hanging you never said if style found out or if she cared when they didn't answer the phone did she come over to see what was up or just forget about them a lot left unsaid lousey way to end a story

I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading some of your other stories. Thanks for sharing your submissions with us.

they should have traded floors if she liked his bathroom better also like the rest of the series it was way to unrealistic and against human nature

I enjoyed it even more this second time around. Thanks for a really good story.

They spoke of not being able to be to gether , then have mind blowing incestous sex.

Gave it 5 stars. Want more chapters, well done.

The title said it all, that's the reality of that type of relationship, no in for penny or in for a pound, it's in for a pound or complete separation never to see or talk to each ever again.

Beautiful, finally lovers.

P L E A S E......label all stories in order

"This ia a continuation of " ", I strongly suggest you read that story first to understand the plot. Enjoy"

is it really so fuckin hard to put that at the beginning of each story if they are related (or a direct continuation)??

Well by not putting these stories into a chronological order and creating a series you have screwed up the storyline. I came across the last story and read it before I realized that there were more stories in the series. To do your stories justice, put them into a series so the reader and properly enjoy them in sequence.