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by champagne198208/01/08

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Oh to be a vintage, nurtured, fermenting, perhaps a little restless.

I'd have never taken you as a vintner.

A poem with good nose...

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by UnderYourSpell08/01/08

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And howe long will this vintage meed to be laid down?

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by normal jean08/02/08

good grapes :)

are grown around here as well. Thanks for teaching me something today...as well as the underlying message...I loved the phrase, .....early tannin...very clever.

NJ

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