All Comments on 'Beast takes a Beauty Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
yay finally more

great story..now we will get to see more inside of who Ben is.. this should get a little interesting.. don't keep us waiting so long for more .. I like this story and I'm looking forward to more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Story

I am enjoying this story, but I do have one little thing to say. We know they are speaking french, it is not neccisary to put their words in french and then the translation. Its easier to read if you simply state what they are saying. But other then that another enjoyable chapter thank you

bad_girl69bad_girl69over 15 years ago
FINALLY

I have been waiting so long for you to write another chapter... YEAH!! lol But it just made me sad because it was so sort compared to the others :( Please can you write some more and write fast. PLEASEEEE

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'm so glad

you've finally written more of this story, I just wish it were longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love it!

FINALLY! Please more but dont make us wait so long! Love it! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
So Glad

So happy that you have continued with this story. Can't wait to learn more about Ben...

tnme3tnme3over 15 years ago
On Edge

We're all so happy that you updated your story but... Quality over quantity. I guess that you are building up a fight and this was a short chapter but I still love the story. Post the next attachment soon! (Please)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oooh!

Raegan is not going to like being used, Ben's is going to need some divine intervention on this one. Good story Siddisticbeuty, I'd really like to find out more about the pack and the characters you created, but I'm especially curious to find out how Ben is going to explain this hot mess to his "breeder".

DarkWriter13DarkWriter13about 15 years ago
pretty nice!!!

i love this story!!!!! its so well written, but i think you should have made raegen (thats how you spell it right?) a little more reluctant. the story was still really good, and i like the french in it, even though the actual french words arent necessary.

sunshinesdevotionsunshinesdevotionover 14 years ago
More please!!

I think this could go far. The characters are strong! Please give us more!!

LaFemmeWildcatLaFemmeWildcatover 14 years ago
please?!

you have to write more! i demand it.

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
more

wheres the rest?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
any more??

Is there going to be anymore to this story?? Its been ages

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
more more more

i want to know wat happens... is there anymore to this story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More

Please continue writing. I want to know what happen next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Keep it going.

This is going great. I can't wait to find out what happens next. How can they find love through rape?

cristina0123cristina0123almost 14 years ago
more please!

i cant wait to see what happens next!

MaxillinaMaxillinaalmost 14 years ago
can't wait

Wowsers i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
finish plz

Can't wait for the next installment plz continue with this story and good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Magnifique!!

This is one of the best stories i've ever read!!

Using french in between makes it a lot sexier, too.

Please continue!!!

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
PLEASE continue

i hope u do another i want to no what will happen?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
where ar u??????????????????

omg i keep wishing and re-wishing that you will update something on this story and well ............nothing. =( hope you find inspiration soon and continue with the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
aww

i enjoyed this series but the chapters are too short and to be honest to fast paced. i do look forward to a continuation, so dont be selfish and write more :-P

fefe428fefe428over 12 years ago
An ending to this story would be nice!!!

You've left us all hanging to see what happens. Does Ben win his fight, and what happens when Reagan finds out Ben's plans? I hope you plan to finish this sooner rather than later!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

so what happen next?

drews_lette11drews_lette11over 11 years ago
You have got to be kidding me

You stop writing this story and no posts for FOUR YEARS!!! I'm half tempted to take over this story just to finish it.

Maria_LunaMaria_Lunaover 11 years ago
finish?

I would love to read the rest of the story

primadeaprimadeaabout 11 years ago
hmmm

ok the story is god, but the French is horendeous :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

NEXT CHAPTER PRETTY PLEASE!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
more please

Continue, Continue, and Continue!!!!!!! LOL

QNastyQNastyabout 10 years ago
Weird..

This is so weird.. everythings happening so fast. It's good dont get me wrong but weird. Not really for me but i'm glad I read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
ANOTHER NO ENDING STORY,,,SUCKS

WHY,,do people do this,,,,have some respect for others who become your fans,,although im sure you wont get this after 8 years of being inactive,but it helps me vent about all the unfinished stories on here,,,,WASTE OF MY TIME,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
chapters

these chapters are actually pages. at most, this should have been two chapters. that being said, the sexual encounters were excellent, and should titillate the most jaded reader. read a similar tale that spanned about thirty long chapters. it was one of the best reads i ever encountered. this tale has the potential to surpass that, if the author commits to expending the effort this tale deserves.

avengilineavengilineover 9 years ago
he is an asshole... but its a good story

Why does he have to be such a jerk? Needs more... its really short

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

Please tell me there is another chapter

LunaMarie666LunaMarie666over 8 years ago
More Please!!

I have certainly enjoyed this story; can't find many that follow the forward ways of wolves as well as including the mating knot at the end! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon even if it has been years since you last touched this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well

I wonder if he ever came back...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Finish this please!!

You have to continue this, it's not fair to leave us all hanging!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Possible ending

He walked back to the cabin spent a few hours warming up to come back to a massacre. The former Alpha would rather kill everyone than let a new Alpha take over...dun dun ddduuuuuunnnnn.

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