I really liked this well written story of a vampire taking revenge for a human, I hope you will continue with her life and where it takes her.
Wishing you continued success with your writing!
I liked your story very much, thanks.
I learned how to read when I was four. This tale is a perfect illustration of why I haven't stopped. It was captivating, enthralling, mesmorizing and amazing.
You rock, babe. You rock.
I like how you don't give any clues to her nature until the end. Only her lack of concern was the only indication that there was more to this. I've toyed with the idea of a vigilante who infiltrates like this. Nice concept.
Would have been 5 stars if she had had the compassion to save the innocents
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