by Jack_Slade
You can write a stroker story --but for God sake, get your tenses right, do and edit beyond spell check. Not much to this, frankly.
But it desperately needs to be edited and by more than one person. Despite that, I'd like to see another in this series. Maybe Jennifer's brother will help her learn to be more assertive.
I know you wrote these some time ago but I would love to see some more...Maybe involving the brother next time...And then all three the final time???
that made me so wet and horny. i masterbated and came hard. more plz! i voted 5 stars.
omg! i loved it. my pussy is soooooo wet. can you send grandfather and his sun over to me. so they can fuck me both at the same time.
x
The best series I've read in a long time. I hope you find the inspiration to add another chapter or two. The brother would be a good addition,maybe not because she really wants to, but because either grandpa or uncle Tom make her because she's been a bad girl once more. Even better would be her being forced to have sex with the ugly old men Uncle Tom talked about.
You need to write a couple more chapters. One for a DP and one for a gangbang.
Got my cock hard as a rock when grandpa butt fucked her.
Thanks for the story
John