by secrecy456
DAMN YOU ARE ONE BADASS WRITER....I LOVE ME SOME LUKE!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GRACING US WITH YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING.......
See,I knew you werent going to give up! And then you go and pull this out your ass! yay!!!!!! This was really really really freaking awsome work. EVERYONE wants to have marathon sex like that, that's the kind of sex you light a candle and pray for!!!! YOU DID A AWSOME JOB!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!! YAY!!!
to see a whit man fucking a mare nigger girl for a change instead of a nigger fucking a white blonde married woman. very refreshing.
LOVED THIS SHORT STORY. EVERYTHING THING YOU WRITE IS FUCKING AWESOME. A FAN FROM THE REAL DOWN SOUTH, MISSISSIPPI!!!!!!
Who is the fool making ignorant "n-word" comments? This was a great short story! Good effort! And commentators out there don't have anything pleasant to say, keep your ignorance to yourself!
and sensual your pace,descriptions and story structure had readers melting all the way to the last paragraph. Please tell me you are giving free 'wild, hot and spank me' Lukes away or at least setting up a loan a man scheme! This piece was succint with no surplus words / converstations just intense passion. You are an awesome writer
Show em' what you got girl! Hot and sexy....that's the way I like it. Keep them coming...literally!
That was hot!!! Ain't nothing wrong with Marathon sex!!Coming from another real down south reader in Alabama!!!
So hot and delicious secrecy. So glad you found my stories so I could find yours.
Greet story1 Very hot and sexy! Yeah ans us "nothern Girls" enjoy like a little marathon sex just as just you guys inthe south! lol!
Your story was good as far as the writing goes, but there was no emotional attachment between the two. It was nothing but sex, which made the story dry. Next time emotion would be a great way to go. Atleast they will be more human than robot. It was like a long sex session.
Damn!!!! How about this is some real _ish_. Love it. So it was straight up sex... YEP...just sex on the rocks, hot, steamy, physically releasing. I'm sold! Let's Get It! On to the next one! *HippyDelight*