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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You Rock!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
DAMN, DAMN ANOTHER HOME RUN!!!!!!!!

DAMN YOU ARE ONE BADASS WRITER....I LOVE ME SOME LUKE!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GRACING US WITH YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING.......

VampiresLotusVampiresLotusover 15 years ago
Fantastic!!!

See,I knew you werent going to give up! And then you go and pull this out your ass! yay!!!!!! This was really really really freaking awsome work. EVERYONE wants to have marathon sex like that, that's the kind of sex you light a candle and pray for!!!! YOU DID A AWSOME JOB!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!! YAY!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
HOT!!

Wow, now that's erotic. sensual and sexual, very, very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
pleasant

to see a whit man fucking a mare nigger girl for a change instead of a nigger fucking a white blonde married woman. very refreshing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!

LOVED THIS SHORT STORY. EVERYTHING THING YOU WRITE IS FUCKING AWESOME. A FAN FROM THE REAL DOWN SOUTH, MISSISSIPPI!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OMG!

Who is the fool making ignorant "n-word" comments? This was a great short story! Good effort! And commentators out there don't have anything pleasant to say, keep your ignorance to yourself!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Totally erotic

and sensual your pace,descriptions and story structure had readers melting all the way to the last paragraph. Please tell me you are giving free 'wild, hot and spank me' Lukes away or at least setting up a loan a man scheme! This piece was succint with no surplus words / converstations just intense passion. You are an awesome writer

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
That's what the hell I'm talking about!!

Show em' what you got girl! Hot and sexy....that's the way I like it. Keep them coming...literally!

mrskelleymrskelleyover 15 years ago
You go Girl!!

That was hot!!! Ain't nothing wrong with Marathon sex!!Coming from another real down south reader in Alabama!!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Wow!

Missed this story before. It was hot!

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
so hot secrecy

So hot and delicious secrecy. So glad you found my stories so I could find yours.

Goddiva11Goddiva11over 15 years ago
CHAMPION

Whoa this story is FIRE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story!

Greet story1 Very hot and sexy! Yeah ans us "nothern Girls" enjoy like a little marathon sex just as just you guys inthe south! lol!

NavauraNavauraover 14 years ago
Interestingly okay

Your story was good as far as the writing goes, but there was no emotional attachment between the two. It was nothing but sex, which made the story dry. Next time emotion would be a great way to go. Atleast they will be more human than robot. It was like a long sex session.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
This is what the hell I'm talking about!

Damn!!!! How about this is some real _ish_. Love it. So it was straight up sex... YEP...just sex on the rocks, hot, steamy, physically releasing. I'm sold! Let's Get It! On to the next one! *HippyDelight*

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Micheal Jackson's Song Comes to Mind:

You rock my world!!! DAMN!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

You should think about publishing your stories. I would read em.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

Watch the repetition

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