I like the twist, retribution for someone else. Excellent twist at the end. A nice Wanderer tale.
Wanderer,keep up the good work.
Great twist to what I thought when I started to read it, was just another wife going astray. You always, always entertain. Thank you!PT
Wonderful twist at the end, really enjoyed this one!
I'm sorry that I didn't give you the 100 you feel you desrve, and I'm sorry I pointed out all the grammatical errors in the story. But I was not rude or nasty. If you can't handle criticism, don't open your story to comments. To delete comments you don't like is gutless.
don't blame me.
I've always made a point of "not" deleting anyone's comments - unless they are duplicates or they refer to third parties - and I definitely did not delete yours. You just cocked the process up.
Ask anyone Harry, MWB or anyone who has left, lets say out-spoken, comments on Wanderer stories in the past. I can assure you that they are still there for everyone to read. How dare you accuse me of censoring your comment.
Now have the decency to post an apology and it wouldn't hurt your ignorant arse to apologise to me by email as well.
Had you had the decency to write and ask what happened to your comment I would have told you that it never made it onto the system. Jesus, I can't abide ignorant arseholes especially anonymous ones.
Enjoy your stories, well written and interesting, Thanks.
Where has this excellent author been hiding anyway?! RAG
Very well. I've decided that I can no longer tolerate the few anonymous cowardly liars who regretfully frequent this site. I do not delete comments and with-in guidelines such as repeated comments and comments that refer to third parties have never done so in the past. All Denham Forrest and The Wanderer tales will be withdrawn in the very near future. DC
Don't stop because someone who doesn't have a name upsets you. I have said I will quit a few times because commnents have pissed me off. In fact I'm sure many people would like me to quit. But thanks to some very good friends I am still here. Annoying everyone I'm sure! My point is you are the reason I started writing don't quit now! Just a quick note about your story I think it was great I was a bit concerned about the way the story was going but I am happy it went the way it did. A wife staid true and the evil ones got justice served on them. My kind of story!
I thoroughly enjoyed your story and intend to read more of yours. Sex is best in the anticipation stage: the expectation and the tension build and the burst of pleasure at the end is enhanced. So it has been with literature since Aristotle crafted his POETICS. The fact that you diverted us onto a different path at the end is just another thrill to the ride. Please continue.
R. H. Andrew, Ph.D.
Wanderer, in my early days posting here, you wisely advised me not to take umbrage at people's comments. There are some very strange people on here who want to police the world of literotica in the hope that they can make it conform to their own particular mores. They are prolific in the comments section, but strangly absent as authors. I wonder why? We all know who they are and they usually appear very quickly when you post!
Please keep writing and posting - if for no other reason than keeping me amused by their ramblings. Like you, I have never deleted a derogatory comment - we have to provide a raison d'etre for "Harry in Vitriolic Anonimity" and "married with testicles for brains" et al
I liked it. Suspenseful to the end.
Congratulations! Wonderful suspenseful story with clever surprise ending. Keep up the great writing.
60 year old George
Started out in the dark but finished in the light. Great read even if short. LOVED IT.
as justice should be!!
wife. It was very good and I agree a nice quiet swim would have been very nice for them. Wild animals like these do not belong in civilized society.
Like everyone else I think, I was caught out by the ending - brilliant twist. Brilliant story.
Now, no more of the nonsense of quitting or deleeting...BTW, when are you planning to submit your next story?
More stories please.
I would say at this point, your fans/following is outnumbering the obnoxious critics who are just jealous of your and a lot of others talents. Don't let them get to you, you are a great talent and I would like to see you continue.
I am not a writter, and I just like to read these wonderful stories. There are some great Authors here that have not posted any stories in a while because of these Dolts who find it necesary to make believe they are some great minds trying to make themselves feel better and approve of who is a good writter and who is not by there ignorant standards. Ignore them and hopefully they WILL go away eventually. But, no matter what please keep on writting. Little comment, DG did u hear me??
as I do all of yours and enjoy reading it again as your stories never lose their appeal. Dockside
I hope that the sexual predators that haunt all the bars around the world read it and shudder to think that they are too being targeted.
For all the bosses , co workers, and just palin creeps that think a drunk woman is a pushover. And her husband is always a wimp...hahahahahahahhaha
The gal had a lot of courage and the husband should be committed to Bedlam for putting her in harm's way willingly. A lot could have happened during the ride...
But a really fine and hard hitting short story. Thanks!
I'd almost forgotten how much fun your stories can be. Where do the years go?
Good story though
This is a tight well written story. There is adequate character development and a punch in the ending. Well done.
gOOD JOB Denham, a very enloyable read. R.T.
Not the normal LW story. I enjoyed it even though, for my tastes, it was a bit too short.
I hope, however, that you never let them drive you away from all of the rest of us who truly appreciate what you do!
Where are the anon comments? Can't you see that this writer stopped them all ? Perhaps you should see your doctor to increase your medications.
And the story is not all that great. Just average to low.
And I kind of liked it so I gave it 5*****s.
Good story 5 stars.
wont give payback to those 3 and add miles to go and the THAMES is deep. TK U MLJ LV NV
Great and surprising story. Nice work! ^__^
Revenge is always good.
Just a nitpick at the end: meat is hung, people are hanged.
I really appreciate; short and not a word wasted. Really top quality.
Thanks for the offering.
I was a bit worried for a while - gee did you did that on purpose lol
Thanks for sharing.
A GOOD RETRIBUTION.
you had us wondering what was happening. was the wife stepping out on her husband? was the husband a voyeur? was the bartender in on it? the server as well? were the guys in the predator group so well organized that they could get a way with it?
It all came to a concise resolution by dropping a bare minimum of details at the conclusion of a well crafted tale. well done.
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