All Comments on 'Breeding Station'

Detailed, fun, and very exotic. Very well written, and you get to the point!

Well done!!

>roticwizard

I loved your story, and would really like to see the pics that go with it but can't find your site!

best one I've read

Please write another chapter to this where the men and women of the base are taken over as well.

it is 3dmonsterstories.com ... Wish you didn't have to subscribe but to e honest i find reading it is much better. You make up "avatars" for these characters from your own opinion, each monster will look completely different for every person reading it. THAT is why I LOVE erotica.

I found this to be a very interesting story with possibilities for sequels. Mabye have the DNAR explained and explore what happens when the subjects are away from it's influence. Explore what happens to hybrid creatures, if any are born. Hell, have a recurring creature that got fixated on one of the ladies and want more of her. Lots of possibilities. Good work.

I enjoy these stories, very imaginative. Please keep going.

I enjoyed this story very much. Would love a sequel. What happens on the base? How do the dynamics change when there are men present?

wow that was great

what is your website I want to see these images just to help stir my imagination further...

This is one of my top 2. And you wrote the other one, also ;)

Your stories make my wet pussy ache.

Make me dance, I want to surrender

Your familiar arms I remember

We've been going transcontinental

Got no car, we just take a rental

But we don't have the money

Money makes the wheels and the world go round

Forget about it, honey

Make me dance, I want to surrender

Your familiar arms I remember

Everybody's talking about you

Every word's a whisper without you

But we don't have the money

Money makes the wheels and the world go round

Forget about it, honey

Trouble's never far away when you're around

'Cause we don't have the money

Money makes the wheels and the world go round

Forget about it, honey

I didn't see it coming

I'm just not in the running

Take me on a train 'cause I'm not flying

I can see the world from a different side

Read about us in the morning papers

When we make it, when we make it alive

I didn't see it coming

Make me dance, I want to surrender

I'm just not in the running

Make me dance, I want to surrender

And we don't need a lifetime

Make me dance, I want to surrender

We're following the right line

Make me dance, I want to surrender

And we don't need a lifetime

Make me dance, I want to surrender

We're following the right line

Make me dance, I want to surrender

I didn't see it coming

Make me dance, I want to surrender

I'm just not in the running

Make me dance, I want to surrender

And we don't need a lifetime

Make me dance, I want to surrender

Songwriters ("Belle & Sebastian")

MARTIN, SARAH / MURDOCH, STUART / COLBURN, RICHARD / COOKE, MICHAEL / GEDDES, CHRISTOPHER / JACKSON, STEPHEN / KILDEA, BOB

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S. Bloom in "Tears of Mermaids"

I'm writing this quote from memory, also the exact title, so I may have gotten it slightly wrong.

We should think more about pearls. And oysters.

With another "anon." saying this story "... makes my wet pussy ache."

Someone might think that becaus i call myself anon i said that. That reading this story "makes MY* wet pussy ache." (I was always into aching. It's fun. As long as it's your pussy, not your head. There's a Difference.)

Right. People read this, THIS, post and think, say ...

fun, silly, and safe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'd be really sort of --repulsed? Sorry!

But the exclimation points make it lighter and sillier.

"No one knew from where the big white dog had come ... and everyone thought she was dangerous, an outlaw. Even when she tried to help them ...

Get that dog! ... Don't let her get away! ...

Try as they might, no one could capture the big, white dog...

tired and friendless, she wandered ...to the place where she was born ..."

Meets Sebastian"--the cartoon, and listening to "I Didn't See it Coming,"

Is a pretty special experience. You should try it.

"Hey, what is this?

After him!

Take that! And that!"

"Make me dance, I want to surrender."

"I got you now!"...

Who do you think you are? This is private property ..."

Your familiar arms I remember."

"Now we've got him ... he's trapped up there! yeah, we just have to wait...

I'll get you for this! ...

Hey get off there or I'll call the police ... "

"I didn't see it coming ...

Your familiar arms I remember. Everybody's talking about you.

Every word's a whisper without you ...

trouble's never far away when you're around--

Sebastian to Belle--"Read about us in the morning paper--"

(Sound of a large--beautiful--dog's tongue slurping Sebastian's face.)

oh, she's a girl

make scary things in a story seem so unscary, childish, cartoonish, innocent, and--who wrote this?

What I wrote above is actually--important. For psychologists, etc. Oh. Maybe the above writer is a grad student in psych at UIHC--then, yeah. Exclaimation points make stuff less scary.

I realized early on that exclaimation points are girly. "Real men," i guess, don't use them often. So, if you want to say something girls/ women might find "threatening," make them pull away, have distrust--use exclaimation points!

Be user friendly. In a gentle girl-erotic-friendly way.

You'll be better off for it.

it will be--actually--sort of fun?

"Our aspirations are wrapped up in books. Our inclinations are hidden in looks."

If the reality world intruded, you wouldn't have this.

"She was in love with him--

she tried to sound supercilious (sp?)--

but "she'd been unfaithful"--

to what?

Disapproving Rabbit--"Let's see--

9:00: Disapproval

10:00 Disapproval

11:00 Nap "

females are thinking about or want or dream about--

we're outside the law--

no i'm being serious even if it sounds silly

yes, i care about this, take this seriously ...

i didn't realize this earlier, but this is a kind of dream i had--

of us being important, mattering

and we got wet, dared, and

got wrapped up in books!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I got myself so worked up about something--like a fainting goat--

but i still want to feel things-- even if i do sometimes faint--

"One could do better than to faint."

This is hot stuff.

I am in love with your stories about the DNAR. I hope you will continue writing stories about it. Please keep up the amazing work!!

Your stories are crazy hot!

That was very freaky,but I liked it.This was such a creative and unusual story.

The part with the cum coming out of her mouth was so hot I came instantly my pussy is on fire thanks for the amazing read

This was wonderful and interesting as I mentioned in the Nursing Girls. Yes I have written down your name on here and plan on reading each one. This is a good one but I do like the Nursing Girls that was great. So hope you will write more. Thanks !

You have remained my favorite author for years and none of your stories disappoint me. In fact, with every one....

Belle1

Never was into sci-fi, but loved this story!!!

You need an editor. You confuse tail with tale and track with tract.