All Comments on 'Outside Her Comfort Zone'

...but usually a story has a bit more happen, ya know? Please keep writing, maybe even finish this story! I personally like a story to be complete in one reading, but that's just me... This one looks like your computer ate the final 2/3 of the story! Great job so far - don't stop!

Off to a good start, but you've got a long way to go. Don't have her be seduced right away--but gradually.

Nice move, ending it there. Total surprise, but a hot one, not a frustrating one. Revs up the imagination.