by donnatah
That was a pretty hot story. The jumping back and forth between the 2 characters' points of view was both interesting, but yet confusing...I liked it (changing perspectives) more than I didn't. You have a very vivid writing style and I could really get a sense of how hot and horny the woman was. Please continue :>
Have to say that I liked the 2 person perspective as it was so well written and 'jumped' at the right time. Hope you are going to do more as I loved it!!
Well, I thought it was great....and funny thing I laughed all the way through it in addition to the anticipation. It was hot. Not confusing to me at all...but I am the (as some could and would describe) crazy girl with the well . I laugh because I relate( to all of it). Brilliant and might I say please give us more and don't stop it where you did. It's amazingly funny as if you have zoned in on a girl that relates so much to the character I lead in my real life. Loved it.
thanks...crazy but tap-able
-jrw
I Love it Next time I will lick your fingers. lol and more