All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Son Ch. 02'

I thought this story moved along quickly, and was pretty damned hot. I'll be interested to see where it goes from here ...

Loved your story !!!!!!Can't wait to read the rest.

Story line has potential Is a bit cliched and chapters dont build up They need more detail Dont give up

A lot of authors seem to stop writing just when it's getting good, so I hope you will finish. This is so hot, a hot, cocky younger guy dominating an older guy. Mmmmm... Thanks for your work so far!

I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M BEGGING YOU TO WRITE SOME MORE!!

THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!!!

Needs some more storyline.

At 43? I don't think so. Personally so far this makes no sense

I like it. I am in my mid-40s and used to be very dominant. I don't know but something changed and like Luis, I was "discovered" by a 22-year old neighbor kid. He too knew he could control me...seduce me...and it was fucking great. He turned me into a submissive, cock sucking, ass licking, nipple playing man cunt

any more to this. o and could you make the chapters longer. these are to short.?

Love the story, would love to read more, please write another chapter soon.

It makes me so horny to be humiliated and completely submit to a real man like that. X sissy Lucy x

So disappointed the author gave up on this.

Thought it had so much potential and although it was short and stopped abruptly I have still managed to get off fantasising about the narrator submitting to Luis and his hot body and cock.

You never finished this, quitter.........too bad

Heh hot and great story I love it u should add another chapter if u have time

Rubbish !!