All Comments on 'David's French Tutor Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Delicious Victorian fever-dream

Beautiful and thrilling, as ever. Particularly enjoyed the detailed descriptions of the ladies' undergarments.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you for giving me the wonderful material to enjoy while masturbating. I really appreciate the descriptions of how women smell..

These are my favorite stories to read. The subject matter is perfect; and the writing superb.

netgnosticnetgnosticover 4 years ago
Loved it!

I hope you plan to write more in this series! The twins are adorable and delicious, even when they fart.

There is one bit of dialogue that I just can't get past:

"Come on you two, let's see some action."

It just has the wrong feel for the Nineteenth Century, and I respectfully request an edit.

I particularly look forward to David's direct discipline by Miss Marie!

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