by Thorilla
Beautiful and thrilling, as ever. Particularly enjoyed the detailed descriptions of the ladies' undergarments.
These are my favorite stories to read. The subject matter is perfect; and the writing superb.
I hope you plan to write more in this series! The twins are adorable and delicious, even when they fart.
There is one bit of dialogue that I just can't get past:
"Come on you two, let's see some action."
It just has the wrong feel for the Nineteenth Century, and I respectfully request an edit.
I particularly look forward to David's direct discipline by Miss Marie!