All Comments on 'Thirteen'

Very, very good piece. Made me relive being a teenager and dread my girls getting older. :) I really liked "She leaps toward the adult world with risky mad lunges,". Thank you VERY much for such a fine read.

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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well written, tight and very expressive. I really felt like I was present for the moments and emotions you're describing. Really good work!