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by Safe_Bet09/03/08

Nice.

Like your piece a lot. I especially liked the lines "and the smile I smile only for you, finds it’s way to my lips."
Thank you.

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by LeBroz09/03/08

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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.



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very nice

Your last four lines are particularly strong here. A nice ending.

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