All Comments on 'Your Voice'

by Willow Rain

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Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
Nice.

Like your piece a lot. I especially liked the lines "and the smile I smile only for you, finds it’s way to my lips."

Thank you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
very nice

Your last four lines are particularly strong here. A nice ending.

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