All Comments on 'Just A Taste Ch. 02'

by donnatah

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soulchumpsoulchumpover 15 years ago
Damn, Donnatah! You're on fire!

Apparently comments written to you are truly taken into consideration, because I know a ton of people loved your first chapter and wanted these two to hook up immediately. Thanks so much for the pay-off! And what a fucking pay-off, my God!

Both of your characters are so freely sexual and unabashedly vocal that it just makes me want to be a patron in that bar and listen to every last moan (or better yet, I'd like to be the guy who monitors the security camera in that bathroom . . . full sound and picture!)

I can't wait to hear how (and where!) these two continue to let off steam from their obvious heat for each other.

Keep it coming,

Soul

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