I really enjoyed it. Lots of fun and you caught the Yorkshire turn of phrase and attitude very well. One small complaint was that it seemed to be a bit hurried at the end. Not the kind of thing Mavis would have liked at all!
Gotta give u 100% for this, Being a native yorkshire man, u got the dialect and sayings down to a "T".
I nearly wet me-sen as i was reading it, and i hope u post more like this
Can't! snicker, groan, hohohahahaho,Stop! heeheeheee,Laughing!!!
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