All Comments on 'Free Swim'

The setting of the story has a lot of potential.

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I wish the girls would have done something more than embarrass the protagonist.

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More detailed imagery would have been nice (including the features of the girls).

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Please write another story like this, but with more of a plot and more elaboration.

It's almost a shame more people didn't see him naked but I can deal with the salacious groping from the ladies.