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Cock of Ages Ch. 16

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/13/08

Wonderful

It was as wonderful as Bean Counter, It has been a great series

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by Anonymous09/14/08

Must have more!

The suspense is killing me. I have enjoyed this more & more as it goes on. I cannot wait for the next installment! If only it could be written as fast as I read it.

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by Anonymous09/14/08

killing me

oh that's just cruel! one page??? why can't you just write the whole book and let me buy it instead of drawing it out forever and making me read it over months and months???? ahhhh you're just mean!!!

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by Anonymous09/14/08

damm

That sux... now we have to wait to find out if it is the Calvary or what... awesome story man haven't enjoyed a series this much in a LONG time

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by Anonymous09/22/08

Hmm

Why do I feel that Creamer has become bored with his character and this theme, and decided to bring the series to an end?

Hope not. Maybe he'll emulate Conan Doyle, and our hero will ride again.

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by Labe_Lover09/22/08

Warning to Buyers

I love the series but I was extremely disappointed when I accessed his listed website and tried to buy his book. After paying for the download I discovered that it only included the portion posted on this site, not the entire story. Nothing indicated I was only getting "Book 1". I feel like Creamer got me.

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by Labe_Lover09/24/08

Warning Follow-up

After talking with Creamer via email I realize that the problem with the purchase is not his fault, but the website selling the product. He was very sorry for the problem and offered a refund. We worked around it and I look forward to the rest of the series, EVEN IF I CAN'T BUY AND READ IT RIGHT NOW!! Hurry, Please!

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by Creamer09/30/08

Creamer, here.

Just wanted to let everyone know, it isn't a matter of me losing interest in the character -- it's that the character has generated interest far beyond the bounds of Literotica, and I am now engaged in a re-write. Also looking for a new, less in-your-face title. Suggestions are welcome, and if I pick yours I'll give you a cameo in a future work.

Thanks for reading . . . more soon . . .

Creamer

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by Anonymous10/06/08

Thanks

Interesting concept, I enjoyed reading this series very much. Enough sex to keep it interesting too. Thanks, looking forward to book 2 and to the follow-up on Geeks as well.

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by northwoods_sub10/09/08

Thank you

Thanks for a great series! Can't wait to read more from you.

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by BlewWater6911/21/08

Well Conceived!

Creamer,

Like your work. Haven't read Geeks yet but going to. This story was excellent. How about, "Time...and time again," for your title. Just a thought.

Blewwater69

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by Anonymous11/25/08

further intrest

im wondering if your going to write more on this storie or make a book out of it because i'd love to read it.

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by Anonymous12/05/08

Great Writing

I just finished reading the series and wow was it good. If you make this into a book with a follow up to the ending I would love to read more.

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by Anonymous03/14/09

What a story~ Fantatisic

Any bets that it's one of his children who works the program in the future and didn't appreciate the morality?

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by Kiprich05/11/09

loved it

Good to see there's a rewrite comming,
really loved this character, one of my favourites over here,

"Top of the gene chain" would be my suggestion for a new title ...

would love to have a cameo :-)

would buy the books, I prefer the oldskool hardcovers,
but dont's use a creditcard or paypal (oldskool again, I am a cash man), and there are no opportunities left ...

when someone could help
feel free to contact me ...

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by Anonymous05/13/09

great story

I truely loved this story. Not just because of the erotica, but because of the story itself

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by Anonymous05/22/09

Further submssions

Hi I was wondering where the continuation has gone? There was a warning email but i couldn't work out where it related to. Thx Culen

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by arghjac07/15/09

Title

Well done Creamer, this is erotica at its best. RobbyJ
Suggest title: Time - A time for all seasons

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by Anonymous09/07/09

Good stuff

This story was so enjoyable I would have read it without the sex. Better with it, of course. Looking forward to the next book. (It'd make a hell of a movie, too - hehehe)

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by Typo Fu Master09/13/09

Blown away

This is heroin content at its finest. I couldn't stop reading. Fantastic story! Would've been good even without the sex. That was just icing on the cake. I read the end and went "Noooo!" Can't wait to read the next part. This is arguably the best story I've read on here. Thank you!

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by shreycyber12/22/09

Fabulous story

This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read, a compelling mix of erotica & creativity. I'd love to read a follow up though... Please CREAMER work on it

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by a_h_0101/31/10

Thank you!

This is a great story. I love your humor and tone.

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by Karalangora03/30/10

Amazing

Loved this story! Loved everything about it. I can not wait for 'Book Two'!

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by Anonymous05/06/10

Opinion

This story is one of the most expertly written I have ever encountered (and there are many) on the Literotica site. Although the sex scenes tend to be only average, the narrative is remarkable, superior. This author is truly a writer and I would not be surprised if he made a living by the pen. The most outstanding feature of this story, for me, is the cultural and social knowledge of the 1950s and 60s right down to the John Lennon comment that The Beatles were more popular than Jesus Christ. It is to be inferred that the author has been on the planet awhile; the feeling of those past decades is just too exact for that not to be so. The 1st person narrative has an everyman style reminiscent of a Hammet story. It was a real page-turner. Even the temporal physics was a blast. I was surprised to realize I was much more interested in the outcome of the plot than I was in the sex. I hope the author finishes up his Second Marriage series and returns to writing the second part of Cock of Ages as soon as possible.

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by Anonymous05/08/10

amazing

one of the best ever.. if not the best. I cant wait for more

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by Anonymous05/17/10

Best series in a long time! #1!

I really enjoyed the read. Thanks!

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by POFD06/22/10

Awesome!

When is book two coming out?

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by Anonymous08/04/10

LOVE IT

I can't tell you how much I loved reading this. It was exciting and expertly written. The intelligence was far superior to that of most modern day authors. I cannot wait to read the next book on this. My suggestion for titles would be Traveling Man. That song came to mind when I saw your post asking for suggestions. I don't need a cameo, just lots of anal rape would be good. Love you work!!

Thank you, SubGirl

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by Anonymous01/11/11

loved it

great book. When will book 2 be completed?

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by Anonymous01/11/11

just a gigolo comment!

Seriously, best ever, even though I had a problem with the stories, each chapter wasn't quite finished, don't know whether this is due to time travel or my blackberry not loading properly! But otherwise wow, an actual story not just a quick wank, fav author ever!

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by Anonymous01/23/11

amazing!!

This is an awesome story. It's got just the right amount of story to go with the sex.

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by Anonymous03/02/11

Excellent story

Now that was great. A real story that was also hot as one of those girls pussies.

So any chance for BOOK 2?

Thanks for the great story one of the best I have read on here.

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by Anonymous03/05/11

I second a book 2! Pretty please?

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by Sir Galahad03/23/11

I hate having the story stop in the middle.

The sex scenes of this story set mostly were a 4 on a scale of 1 to 10; but the concept is intriguing, about halfway between Larry Maddock's Agent of T.E.R.R.A. series, the Paratime novels of H. Beam Piper and Heinlein's The Cat Who Walks Through Walls -- and if you recognize the latter title you will understand this as praise. However, I presume you are going somewhere with this, Creamer; and it feels to me as though you stopped at about the halfway point of the story cycle. That annoys me. When I read something, I like it to have a beginning, a middle and an end.

So where is the rest of it?

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by khosa05/31/11

Fantastic

This series is absolutely amazing. Please, please don't leave us in suspense for too long, I don't think I could handle it!
x

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by Anonymous06/29/11

Cocksuckers for book 2

We're begging you, please, continue this story. It's one of the best VERY hot and generally intriguing.

...totally willing to suck a cock for it.

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by divby008/11/11

Back story and forestory

Hard combo, but you nailed it. Can't wait for book 2! The technical stuff gets me off almost as well as the sex scenes, so I'm hoping for more of both.

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by Anonymous09/29/11

When will we get more

When will book 2 start. We have been waiting a long time

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by Anonymous12/08/11

This was the first scifi story i read. awesome. you owe me some hours that i should have been sleeping, but i'll let you slide if i can read some more. Thanks. Really enjoyed it.

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by Anonymous01/27/12

WHERE IS THE NEXT BOOK?

Great book, but do need the next book to complete the story

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by Anonymous03/07/12

Great read. Thanks for sharing your talents.

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by Anonymous04/05/12

I need more!

I fucken love every thing about this character, please write more!

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by Anonymous04/25/12

Cock of Ages Rape for me

When I first saw the number of chapters, I thought that I would read the first one, get a quick thrill then move on to another author or story. What a fantastic concept! The stories were well told, the sex scenes were somewhat hot (although I would have preferred more graphic), but they kept the interest and the writing was absolutley on point. Having been around Literotica for about 10 years now, I have come to appreciate good writing more because many of the authors are hacks. This was truly a work of art. I will check back for the 2nd book and you absolutely owe me a couple of nights sleep. :) Keep up the good work. PS-Of all the reading I have done on this site, this is the first time I have EVER written a comment. Kudos to you Creamer.

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by Anonymous06/09/12

Best Story and Best Writer on this Site

I loved this story, which is surprising, given the premise. Please, please, please... write another series for this character!!!

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by Anonymous06/14/12

its sure a great read

still waiting in a few more books of this its sure a great read and i'm sure i'm not the only one who thinks so so lets get at it chop chop

dave

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by Anonymous06/21/12

Great mini stories!

What writing! In a couple years do a movie.......

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by Anonymous08/11/12

Lets see book 2

We need more!

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by Anonymous12/26/12

Have to add my voice...

to those asking for more. Excellent series which just begs for resolution.

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by Anonymous04/03/13

Soooooo

Where's book two????? This is a great series, that can go on for a while. I see that the author wrote after this, which I also enjoyed. So CREAMER what happed?

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by Anonymous04/05/13

you have my vote

more please
total sucker for S-fiction
sex good but optional
great FPN

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