All Comments on 'A Nightmare'

Funny poem. I wish you'd found a better title that would hint at the content a bit more. I read once that to get a title you could grab some words or an idea from the closing strophe so in your case: My Place or Mine might work, since there's no real alternative to where you'd need to end up. Good poem, thanks for sharing it. This poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Review thread in Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

I like the story you tell in your poem. Good details.