All Comments on 'Mom's Sleeping Pill'

I really liked the story, the whole nonchalant attitude towards their activities was just great. Keep up the good work. :D

This was a sweet story of a mother taking care of her son's problem and inturn taking care of hers too. I liked it and hopefully there's more.

You need to learn grammar and writing skills. Have you ever heard of a pronoun? Let me give you an example of what I mean, because I know you never learned 4th grade english skills."Get closer to me, Jason." She instructed. < It was implied she was speaking to the son, why did you have to include she instructed? Also your lack of pronouns was very annoying. Mom took my cock in her hand and ran the head of it up and down her slit. Should be She took...

I could feel that it was wet, sort of slimy; but very good. A few swipes of my cock, and Mom (she) pointed it where it needed to be.

The story had nice content but I would suggest going back to elementary school and learning grammar.

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Grammer wasn't great but the story was real. Could easily be a true situation and I liked the flow of events that led to them making love. Good story line. Very believable and good descriptions. Write more like this.

You posted a VERY nice story.

Warmest regards,

Dave

like it sooooo much. good plot, a single middle age mother and her only son. many other mom son story in literotica are ruind by entrance of other character like aunt, dad, brother, sister etc. but you did well to keep mom son alone in concept. in story mothers naked body should be discribe more specially her buttock, son should perform some anal love to his mom like toung on her anus, mom son bath together is too important which is not in this story also. they have sex many years than why not mom get pregnant? mom son should live together, son should not get married.

but all is ok. you have so much skill to write mom son story, why not you write more? want more from you, please come back soon. mother son incest fan need you.

A unique problem that leads to mutual satisfaction. I like the way the story works its way along and everything seems almost like a natural normal development.

loved it

wanna eat my own mums wet cunt before we fuck such a turn on gonna jackoff into a dirty pair of panties my wife left out for me this story has me jerking off as i think about my mothers pussy thanks and write again

I love it. It reads very realistic therefore a great turn on. Only minor complaint, build up was maybe just a little too long and would have liked to read more detail about continued sex life. 5 stars

Huge turn on because it sounds like a true story I loved it

love this story...

I live in London, England. My husband often works away for one or two months at a time. One time, when he was away, I needed sex badly. I went to my 13-year-old son's room when he was getting ready for bed, and seduced him. Now we fuck whenever my husband is not around. We also have great oral sex, and my son loves a 69-er.

Amazing

Just loved it..seems realistic.

Can I have her number?

I know its been years since you wrote the story but wish you can make a part 2 of this probably even include your wife in the story?

What a great story you have written And has been said in the last comment i wish you had or intend to write another chapter including your wife.

11/06/23

Very lovely. A man's orgasm is what created the Son inside his Mother's womb. Why then should her nurturing ever shy away from producing an orgasm in her Son's penis? My Mom was the same way in her early 40's. Big randy nipples, dark dank bush and luscious phat ass. Brenda and I probably would have remained fuck buddies the rest of our lives too, but we decided to make it official instead. We fell in love so hardcore that we got married and started reproducing. Regardless of all that though, whether you make her a fuck buddy or a wife, a mother is still first and foremost Mom. Brenda was my BFF growing up, and when it became undeniable that I was fantasizing about her bubble butt as an adult, she simply rubbed it in my face. Since she's a school teacher, I thought she was using reverse psychology on me at first, but then I realized that Brenda felt flattered, and she wanted to make me horny. As she discovered the mesmerizing, hypnotic affect her body had on me, Mom spoiled me with even more intimacy. Camel toe became a new candy, in addition to the robust visuals of her heart shaped ass flesh. Eventually, like any good mother, Brenda offered me a sniff and a taste. I explored her body with six senses, and claimed every square inch of territory as my own. I kissed Brenda's asshole and made her squirm, but I held her down and enjoyed my sodomic feast. I tasted the tootsie roll center of her curves, that tart clinching starfish, and Brenda farted in my face when she squealed. There's nothing more natural and maternal than that. Brenda spoiled me with the roast beef twat and the dank bush. She fed my lusts with her distended teats and I paid homage to her womb with my sperm. We fit together as a hedonistic symbiosis. The mystery of her meaty cunt and my ardent, filial penis fit together like an ancient riddle, and I fucked three healthy grandbabies into Mom. Our wedding was private, of course, but people know we're together. How could they not? We hold hands everywhere we go, and Mayberry is a small town. Shes been my Homecoming date every year now for over two decades. And all my old school friends still eye her phat ass up like candy, even if her pubes are snow white now. Its been a long and loving journey, but we're finally taking some time off for ourselves, traveling the world as Oedipus and Jocasta. I sodomized Brenda in a Paris alleyway earlier this week, using a five star stick of gourmet butter as lubrication, and we'll be in Thebes for the weekend. I'm not sure what exactly we'll get up to in Greece, but I know it will be romantic, utterly debauched and incestuously harmonious. Thats why sharing stories like ours is so important. Its time us motherfuckers set the record straight. There's nothing tragic, shameful or taboo about the maternal embrace. Mother and Son make perfect fuck buddies, best friends and sometimes they even become Husband and Wife. Sharing wedding rings, lifting Brenda's veil, and fucking my slobbery mother's throat only brought us closer together as soulmates. I feel like we've been living happily ever after, ever since the moment we reunited our genitals, and society would do well to recognize and celebrate something so innocent and righteous.