All Comments on 'Pusher Ch. 05'

by wgarvin

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hornacekhornacekover 15 years ago
pretty good, but ...

... he didn't fuck Mrs. Darling? Great set-up, great seduction, a great blowjob, but then nothing else? A bit of a letdown. But still worth it.

Also good work on adding the nose bleed elements - this makes the mind control more interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great

keep up the good work man. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
keep writing

looking forward to next episode

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good but...

Lots of blowjobs there in your writing. Wish Mrs Darling had been touched, caressing and penetrated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good but no fuck?

Really good, but can you have more than blowjobs please? He needs a fuck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
group

needs all the girls in one bed with him

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
great

maybe the next chapter could have his sister and her friend

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
more

more please, pretty please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
We want more

This was a really hot story and we do hope that you will write more about it pretty please :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More more and then some

A very exciting story. I hope that you will be able to write a few more chapters with just as exciting encounters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I dont understand, he has the power/gift for 2-3 days and he is having only blowjobs. Man get ur dick up and fuck a girl. He practically made his friend a slave and didnt even fuck. He seems to be quite dumb & idiot for his age.

Story line is ok, but u should give some background how he got the power. Some base formation type. Dont jump from one place to another, but weave it from one scene to another. Also give the story a plot and make him explore and learn his power. As per you, he is not even trying to look or think about his power, that can be ok for a one time singe level story, but you opted to make this a series. So atleast try and think lke a 18 yrs old, not a school kid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Anon

All you jokers complaining about the bj only etc, please write yur own story..gez

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SO many ... to pick

The young man is doing well.. soooo many other females to pick from and acquire into his harem... Go for it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

When might we get new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Celeb

Get a celebrity in here! That would be awesome ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Are you going to do more????

I have enjoyed your stories and was looking forward to see what is going to happen when his sister and her friend show up.

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