All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbors Wife & Daughter'

droll up to there anyhow

This was very very choppy, which made it for a tough read. This had no flow to it at all, the build up was what i would describe as "block form", this happend then that happend. Nothing to tie the chapters together, needed more rhythm to make it a good story.

Your submission was like reading cliffs notes on the story. Its almost how a director gives back ground infromation to actors before a performance. This is not the correct writing style for this type of story.

LOVE IT SO WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE COMING

Need more of this one. Maybe Bob and the daughter can begin trying to make a baby in her, and continue to make siblings.

read this story a couple of years ago-not sure which site but this is not a new story

It was a great idea, but could have used a lot more description. It was a bit choppy and directorial.

and an interesting presentation, with a few flaws. Another comment said it was choppy. It was. And jumped too quickly from we live near each other to "let me suck your cock." I request you write a sequel and spend time adding detail to the story and the charcters.

does Debbie or Andrea get pregant a have babies both able and make it a closer family.

oh my short and to the point thank you would likie to know what happens after they live together a while ,babies hubby for Andrea??

i 2nd that notion continue the series

Nice Characters you should consider following up on the Characters and how things develop between them and the Extras brought in by Andrea.

are there any Pregnancies or just Great Sex.

Please do add to this fantastic story

I agree with a couple of others. To get them both pregnant but not at the same , that would be no fun, it’s needs to be one pregnant and to fuck the ,while the other slowly becomes out of action .