All Comments on 'Babysitter's Fantasy Comes True'

You began well enough, but after reading that the girl was driving a vibrator into her pussy and you had three fingers in her vagina, then there's no way in hell the girl would still have a hymen. If you're going to write about a girl's first time, then know the physical landscape.

I didn't mind the 36D boobs, but the 91/2" cock was too much!

You had a good start then somewhere the couple were beamed into another universe. 36D, 9 /12", "Take my cherry ..."

Yea, right.

& No WAY she was gonna still have an intact hymen after the intro! Reality Check Author. Gimme a break, I mean the action was Ok, but the dimensions were off by a mile! Ok, so he has a porn-Star sized dick, but WHY do her mellons need 2 B so big too? Give us the benefit of having a brain, M8! seriously, THIS is why I scored Ur entry so low, U see. Sheesh. Write another once U encounter a woman in Reality & NOT just in PornoLAND, OK? Ur writing is decent enuff. But c'mon!

got me hard and i stayed that way all through the story

Very hot story, I would have given it a five stars had it not been for the 9" cock and blowjob.