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Heading For Trouble

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by Anonymous

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by Tricialen10/01/08

Very Clever!

Really good T! What a wicked twist.

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by past_perfect10/01/08

Great tale

You shall henceforth be called the master of twists ... Really enjoyable piece, well done.
Good luck in the contest!

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by Daniellekitten10/01/08

Very good, very creepy

I did love the twist at the end...

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by PrincessErin10/01/08

Weird

A very weird and creepy story but very well written. I hope it wins.

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by DesertPirate10/01/08

Oh boy!

That was a trip! Well written and I must say that you mind is even more warped that ever, congratulations!

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by Safe_Bet10/01/08

*Snerk*

Muahahahaha. Beautiful. Great Read. You trip me out, dude. Loved it!

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by manyeyedhydra10/02/08

hee-hee

That's what happens when you think with the wrong head :)

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by Munachi10/10/08

funny...

very good twist, great story!

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by SweetWitch10/14/08

Deliciously wicked.

I just love all the hidden doors of your mind.

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by Selena_Kitt10/24/08

Never a disappointment

You never disappoint me, especially this time of year! :)) Good luck in the contest!

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by starrkers10/28/08

Great!

Cruelly funny twist. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.

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by slyc_willie10/28/08

No words

. . . could really express my reaction to this story. Very well done, Tom.

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