All Comments on 'A Night's Tale Ch. 02'

When you switched from the vampire to the victim, it gave a bit of a mental whiplash, as you didn't bother to tell us you were changing point of reference.

Overall, a very nice story.

Heather deserves a series of her own A long one like the million dollar Slaves series. Thanks for your stories.

"The hunting was good between the tourists and the immigrants and the homeless there was a never ending supply of people that nobody noticed or cared enough about to complain if they went missing." I bet she's a Republican or if a Brit botes BNP lol

Heather is my new hero. Sorry, heroine (I guess).