All Comments on 'Academy of Sexual Arts-Ava's Diary'

Pretty good story, but way to short / quick. First off, what kind of school is this anyhow. Other than that, you need to spend more time with it, add more details, and really get your reader's interest. As it was, it was kind of hot, but too short to really get into it.

imnauti - A great first post, but I agree with other posters that it could be a little longer. A little more background of the reason the couple are in the situation. An interesting note from your plot is you mention a time span for the sex at 20 mins. So the challenge should be to try and make the reader feel, and experience, the situation for that long... or close to it. lowflykiwi

I have to disagree with the previous comments. I tend to get bored with stories that are two long. For me, it was the perfect length. I would, however, love to know the story before this one.

Wonderful job Imnuati.

I like the premise of the Academy of Sexual Arts. I'm sure you could do more with it. Sort of a Harry Potter for the pervy set.

Pretty good. I like your premise. I think you could do more with it. Kind of like a Harry Potter for the pervy set.

Great story to start, I'd like to see where this could lead. I'd also like to know where these kind of schools exist as well!

that was a nice story. A+ all the way

I like the way you write. It didn't take long for my cock to get rock solid.

I thought the idea of a demonstration of sexual positions and activity in a classroom setting was brilliant.....the tension of having people watching vs. the excitement of the exhibitionism is a great mix...and the scenario was well imagined and played out...would love to do the same thing with you, nauti...great job.

loved the story, keep it up, hope to see alot more work!

Wow, how many times did you cum?

Very hot story.....can i go to class with you?

good first story hun i preffer a longer story myself` a prologue would of been nice` but hell what do i know i cant write stories` waiting for your next` how about another chapter of ava`s diary or a continuing chapter on the rest of the class

I normally prefer a build up to the sex scene, but with this story I really liked the mystery engendered by the lack of background. Who is Ava & why is she on this course? I'll probably invent a background myself and use this as my own masturbatory fantasy.

Hey there.. I don't know how, but I accidentally stumbled upon your story and might I say what a pleasant surprise!! Great job!!

I like the concept. Any chance of more chapters in the diary?

True story?