All Comments on 'Daddy's Girl Ch. 01'

Well started of story line, just enough to keep me coming back for each instalment without giving it all away.

Look forward to chapter 2.......

I love the way this story started! I can't wait for chapter 2!

Loved the slow and precise buildup, to what was an explosive finale. Can't wait for Chapter 2.

Irresistible combination of Film Noir style heroine in 6in heels with her Daddy. Add superb writing and serve to an adoring public. I only hope there is more planned. Cheers. UK CYNIC

I beat him to the draw , I came before he did .Great story and looking forward to parts 2 and 3 and more as she goes on business trips with Daddy .

This story just left me exited and wanting more. Well written and striking a deep chord.

More please

When can we have the second part ???

I really really loved it and can't wait for what happens next. You can't leave it at that, there's a lot to come yet. Please finish chapter 2 as soon as possible. Thank you.