All Comments on 'Saving Grace'

The twist at the end was very good. I loved the story and now I don't want it to end. I want Jessica to have her happy ending. Loved Grace. Even Jessica's friend, Kelly, was a whoot. Thank you for sharing.

Well written story with a beautifully dark twist. I felt I had to rate this story (first ever). Loved the twist with Grace.

Brilliant! Great character realistic, and sexy just wish the poor mama got laid...

Yes another great story by slyc willie... I very much liked

the ending..

Great story, but is the baby's name Grace or Ellie? Since you referred to her as both ...

I kept wondering what ugly thing you were going to do, to justify the "Erotic Horror" classification. This story touches on so many points of the cold and harsh realities of life, that it is an amazingly riveting tale, yet still full of hope and promise. -- KK in Texas

was wondering too, when the horror part will come in, and was already coming up with all kinds of theories... but none of them turned out to be right...

i suppose ellie was the name the daughter had in an earlier draft and you forgot to change it a few times? or did i miss something and it has a specific meaning there?

anyway, great story, very nice twist...

I did really enjoy this one.

I agree with the other posters - great story. Nice twist at the end. But confusing Ellie and Grace was a bit distracting. Slyc, you're one of the best on the site.

It was building up really nice, only to end suddenly, with a lot of unanswered questions. Strange..

The level of this story with some help would qualify as a story on the twight zone

loved it kept me on the edge of my seat

nice twist. ;0)

Really glad it didn't. This one was "wilde" enough even for All Hallows Eve. I kinda wish you would write a loose follow-up to this so Grace's willowy, lovely, mommy can get well laid. Damn that girl really needs a few inches of raw sausage in her "hot wet 'n juicy."

I would be nice if she really did find an intellegent, reasonably attractive man, that was sensitive and patient. There are way to many young men who are not. By the time they reach my age, many are but they can't do anything about it :)

Keep up the good stuff, Lynn

I liked the long build-up. I was suspicious about Ray, but was completely surprised at the end. Very nice touch, with Grace, at the end.

Things u dont expect in an erotica story......

Amazing story. Life is a circle of events. Be safe all.

Had me hooked all the way to the end. Excellent story. Keep up the good work. Loved the ending. Thanks.

Excellent writing. Well done. Sniffed it out when Raymond said he never liked the looks of the buildings from the outside.