All Comments on 'Taming Tami Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very good - slightly let down by some phrasing

overall very good - didn't dive straight into the sex & the sex was stretched out enticingly. Some of the more tabloid style phrases (fuck-hole, fuck-hungry wife etc) jarred with the rest of the writing I thought

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I really like this story. Great character development and narrative. Keep writing.

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