All Comments on 'Remembering My First Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh dear

Nine years younger and as needy as she was.

LOL Janice

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice memory...

It's a good story and I enjoyed it but it would be improved with a proof-reading and some corrections.

Auld_HenryAuld_Henryover 13 years ago
I like them all

I really like the style, the writing is pared back to the minimum, each story is an improvement on the previous one, so I am looking forward to reading more.

IntercontinentalIntercontinentalover 13 years ago
Nice Idea- poorly written

I loved the idea but it was let down by poor spelling, grammar and changing tenses.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Spoiled

This was a potentially very nice, tender little story but it was spoiled throughout by poor grammar and some truely dreadful spelling errors.

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