All Comments on 'Keri Gone Wild'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not bad for a first try, but...

Why do all the women have to have DD's. Especially after being described as having a compact frame.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Pretty good story.

Fairly good buildup. Maybe lost it in a few places. Not really sure where the incest angle was, but I did enjoy the story. Although it needed a better ending to polish off the night. Please keep writing and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice! Looking forward to more chapters

Good start. Keep up the good work. Nice build up with descriptions. Looking forward to more stories/adventures with Keri and her brother.

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