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Mira Ch. 14

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by Tricialen10/25/08

So Good

As always you leave me wanting more. I wonder how you're going to reconcile this story. Rillan is a monster when he turns, Mira loves him but how can she be with him? And Aris, is she really gone? Can't wait to see what you do.

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by Anonymous10/25/08

Thank you

Thank you for the new post. The inner turmoil of Aris and the self denial - martyr complex of Rillian and Mira are wonderful, heart stopping, and extremely frustrating. Keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous10/25/08

No worries

Just be sure to let us know where you release the finished draft!

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by cantfightfate10/25/08

Good, but very short!

I'm (im)patiently waiting for Mira and Rillan to finally be together again! Looking forward to the next chapter.

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by GlosUK10/25/08

Great

Brill chapter. PJ xx

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by Anonymous10/26/08

love it ..

oh your just dragging in on ..grr I love this story soo much and after so much heartache I just want to see them both happy together.. i am waiting on pins and needles for the rest of this story I can't wait for more.. please add more soon.. oh I love it ... thanks for writing it's wonderful..

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by SydneyMuse10/28/08

oh my....

Aris a vampire...what a twist...waiting eagerly for the next installment...i hope mira and the lord end up together....i so want a happy ending...

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by Smeeker08210/28/08

great job

this story is so wonderfully frustrating :) keep up the good work..cant wait to see where this takes us

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by Anonymous11/04/08

Disconnected

The chapter didn't flow very well; everything was a bit choppy. Because of this the horror of what Aris did didn't really hit home. I didn't really feel as horrified as I should in knowing that all the girls are now dead, because everything happened so quickly & unemotionally, making it unconvincing. I do want to know what is going to happen between her & Liam, and see how she & Rillan gets together, though.

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by spearish12/03/12

Good work

Just when I think I know the plot ....I don't !!

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