All Comments on 'Express Lane Ch. 03'

that was so good why did it have to be so short

Things are going great and i can't wait to see what happens, but i wish the chapter was longer. I hope Ris doesn't completely give Noah all he wants she should make him sweat.

Complicated! Lots of possibilities. . . But where will it all go? And when will there be a new chapter?

Please make the next chapter... This is a great story. Keep on writing express lane!!!! Can't wait till the next chapter.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

This chapter is great. I hope for the next chapter you don't make larissa sleep with Noah right away. He has a girl, it'll make Larissa slutish. Ohh my this is one of the best story I've read on this site. I love the way how you let people think about the next chapter. By the way when is the next chapter coming?

Another good chapter. Off to read the next.

I don't know I am not a big fan of Noah's because I think that Rory is his son. Also why is her sister staying with her and not with their parents. Is the sister Jo in college too? Thanks

I'm happy I found yet another author who's writing style I enjoy. Off to the next chapter!

So she doesn't want anything with a man whom is into her and available...who brings her flowers...that's "too much too soon", but she does want the man with a kid (brother) and a girlfriend who only offered her a "stay the night". Hmm... Maybe James is a little too mature for her 22 year old mind. Perhaps Jo isn't the only one that has some growing up to do.

Ugh women are so frustrating. At the beginning all she did was fantasise about James. Now that she's gotten him and he's offering commitment she's backing up WOMEN. I don't know where this relationship with Noah is heading, personally be confuses me with the mind games that he plays one minute he's flirting the next he's introducing a girlfriend WTF. He has no right to be jealous. My girl needs to give James a try and to live her life

...you have 15 cans of vegetables in your pantry doesn't mean you want or even HAVE to eat one or all of them, just because they're there. If you wanted a bowl of oatmeal or a hot dog and it was also available, you'd pass on the cans for what you really want. That's pretty much how attraction works. So can it with the jumping up and down on fictional people's heads just because they don't behave according to puritanical ration standards.

...an apology. As a self proclaimed fattie, most of not all of my analogies are food related.

He's planning on going back to Spain, why get deeply involved with him. I do not believe Noah is sad because of his brother, I think it is something else that he is hiding.

My experience with people like James is that they are fakes.

How is she gonna say I'm not gonna get down and dirty with Noah if there's a kid in the house, but when she was babysitting rory didn't she get down and dirty with James?

Double standard, she bumped uglies at her own house with Rory around lol anyway her relationship lasted as long as a Kardashian's sad face

"Silver" sounds like a horse name too. I'm intrigued by Noah, but Larissa is a big time hypocrite, which doesn't make sense for her as the responsible older sibling who's been carrying her spoiled sibling her whole life. I know 'cause I did it.