All Comments on 'In The Moonlight'

vivid, rhythmic, tangible, inspirational. Thank you for creating this, and giving it.

"Ripples that in the moonlight shimmer." Why not try: Ripples shimmer in the moonlight. "Whirring, like mosquitoes caught In a net" is a nice description.

"all the way down," "black water," "frogs plop," I can see all of it... I can hear the insects, feel the breeze. Maybe because I've spent so much time in the country this strikes a cord & I recall ponds I've seen with a life of their own. Thank you.