All Comments on 'Choices'

Sally - You write well and tell a nice story. I'll have to read more of your stories.

I could relate to this story in more than just a fantasy type of way. Good work.

I was about to give up but decided to race forward to see if all this feeling stuff would eventually end up with a story or just some jumbled thoughts. I found there was a body to the story and went back and started over. I truly enjoyed this. You had me convinced this could happen. Please keep writing. I normally look for certain authors and I will add you to my list. LOL Thank You

very realistic feeling

Well written, but a bit slow-paced. Certainly makes me

feel like a voyeur and that means that you are giving me pictures and not just words.

Dear Dr. Sally,

This is the best short story I have ever read (and being a 58 y/o lawyer I've read way too many to count). I love how you share your "hidden" self. The sex was nice, too, and was made so much more arousing by what truly seems to include your "real" and honest inner experience (even if the story line was real only in your imagination). Thank you so much. MDM