All Comments on 'The Costume Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 15 years ago

spelling!!!

Hopefully you have many more chapters coming, and you have a clever idea and it is a fun read. However, please, please please proof read your work, there are many spelling and other errors. When you write "nock" for "knock" and similar errors, it just stops a sentence cold. Keep writing, but re-read you stuff a few times.

julie_oregon about 15 years ago

Delicious...

Oh, what a delicious start! I look forward to your next installment!

-- Mistress Julie

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Dearest Miss Nonnie, I am sorry that I submitted a story that I wrote earlier. I had no idea that it was plagiarism. I was proud of it and I wanted you to read it. I am truly sorry.

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