All Comments on 'He Sent Me'

by Scorpio44a

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hansbwlhansbwlover 15 years ago
Very good,

You do write good stories, thanks.

zfammezfammeover 15 years ago
:D

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww......... it's cute :)

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Delicious Story

Better than even a nice cup of coffee in the morning!

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 15 years ago
Could almost be in Humor Category

... not funny per se, BUT this story put a big smile upon my face! Well done!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Very short...

And not nearly enough depth to the characters or the storyline. It felt like I started reading in the middle of a story and didn't get to the end. I love romance stories but this was not romantic at all to me. It left me very unsatisfied. I've given you 25% for the actual writing but I found the story itself quite bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very sweet

I really did like this. Well done, and as someone else said, a nice way to start the morning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Touching...

Though not a nice way to end my day. I am in bed ready to sleep, after reading this, a drop of tears flow down my cheek. Still it's sweet. Thx

KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 15 years ago
Loved it*

The usual from one of the best authors on Lit. I enjoy all your stories. It's a just-nice read; not too long and not too short. This one was so sweet and I loved every moment of it(: Good work! <3 Lillian, KR.

WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 15 years ago
Call me

a Romantic, Very Nice.

the Troubadorthe Troubadorover 15 years ago
I confess to being a romantic. Proud, actually.

I agree with two comments below, it is not a "story." It is an interlude, short, very sweet, and gives all the information an intelligent, thinking person needs to understand the two characters.

Thank you very much.

the Troubador

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
While it was short..........

<p>....I kinda think that was the point. It was a cute, harmless, feel good kinda of story. At first I wondered about the woman, but once he started his attack, and it was kinda a hidden one, it made me go "Aaaawwwww" to.</p>

<p>Nice story!</p>

-Risq

renaissancequeenrenaissancequeenover 15 years ago
funny and sweet

I enjoyed reading this story. you are right, not all romance stories need a sex scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Interesting

I'm liking your writing more and more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
what's with scorpio44a??

Up to the usual Scorpio44 quality-what did u do-change yr name for fun or to confuse people?

JDsellerJDsellerover 15 years ago
Stories like this give us all hope!!!!

I have out lived two wives. The first was the light of my youth. The second was the savior of my heart. When you actually have a soul mate it makes your life feel very empty when they are gone. Please write as many more of these stories that you can. JD Seller

jack_strawjack_strawover 15 years ago
good stuff

Scorpio has always been one of the most talented writers we have, but his older material was often very intense. Lately, ever since he added the a to his sign, he seems to have mellowed, and his writing is better for it. I know what he means about those who believe in romance being able to believe in fairy tales. Those of us who have been lucky enough to have a true soul mate know that it is something that is guided by the fates. I've been with mine for over 25 years and I wouldn't trade her for any woman on the planet.

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkover 15 years ago
Thank you, sir

Thank you for sharing your stories with us. Also, please pay my respects to your parents. They do good work.

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 15 years ago
Superb!!!!

This is one of those stories that are so good that the reader wants more but, let's face it, it really isn't necessary. This story stands on its own merits. I must agree with Jack_Straw - ever since you added 'a' to your "nom de plum", you have mellowed, and you writing is better for it. Pete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So sweet

Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

A superb tale, which I have throughly enjoyed. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great stuff

I loved it <p>

Jenny

The1PaladinThe1Paladinabout 14 years ago
Have to comment

This was a very good tale, very well woven. A "Just right" short story. I finished all the Scorpio44 stuff yesterday. I'm seeing some real improvement in your writing and look forward to finishing off the last couple of years.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
awesome

i love it ,truly an exceptional story would u mind writing a sequel

chunkschunksover 13 years ago
Just...

...fucking brilliant.

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
sometimes flash stories are the best

i just loved it.

ananduananduabout 13 years ago
Just...

....great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Your last story I read I called bullshit! This one I call BRILLIANT!!!

Thanks

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 13 years ago
You still suck !!

Painfully few stories and fewer writers get through my thick hide -

Less than 5 minutes before my boss was due to walk in for an hour long session on NPI Values streams I read this story and was in trouble heh.

Not much to it but it was awesome dead feelings may actually be able to come back to life - not sure - but maybe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This

is awesome. I have to say this is something that was unexpected, but better than anything I have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oooooh!

Good stuff! I love it when I find really good stuff in here. Like I did today. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A fairy tale

spare and charming. thank you.

~ Rusalka

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Best yet.

Best story by you that I have read yet.

de Jay

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 11 years ago

I LOVE THIS STORY!

EAPoeEAPoeover 10 years ago
Less is more

This flash story is a romantic gem

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
NEEDS A TEN OR FIFTEEN

Smooth, straight, and right to the heart. GOOD? NAH GREATT. Thnak you

GP

blkhrtblkhrtover 10 years ago
Hated it. loved it.

It reminds me of someone I lost. She was special. I saw her wither away. It hurts

RePhilRePhilabout 10 years ago
Perfection in Pose!

Period!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thank You

Another great story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I really enjoyed that. Thank you :)

I really enjoyed that. TK U MLJ LV HC

computermadcomputermadover 8 years ago
Sometimes short ones are the best.

I loved this story. I know, I'm soft in the head.

Evil52Evil52over 6 years ago
short

A little short but good.

MoMiner64MeteMoMiner64Meteover 4 years ago
Great Story!

I really enjoyed the story despite the low probability of him sending the same type of flowers with the same greetings with each order of flowers. I just wish that the author had taken the story somewhat further respecting the fact that it is a sexless romance story. For those who normally frequent this site it could be taken to the end of them having sexual intercourse. Lots of possibilities with this story as a foundation.

This reader is totally surprised that he seems to be the lone person to comment on this story. I think that the author hit a home run with this story.

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Oh man

Oh my, this was epic, very nice.

Ocker53Ocker53over 4 years ago
Loved It ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I really enjoyed this one, excellent

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
What a...

....great little story. Inspirational on an emotional level. Five worthy stars. Oh! And thank you!

QuintiusQuintiusover 3 years ago
Lovely

This is a great little story. The imagery is very vivid and even though there's not a lot of dialogue the characters are portrayed well with easily distinguishable personalities. There doesn't really need to be a lot of background for this, it works beautifully just as it is. It's just a nice story about two people who discover they're meant for one another without saying more than a few sentences to each other. All they needed was a little supernatural intervention. Very well done.

auhunter04auhunter04about 2 years ago

From beyond the pale

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Patience & Perseverance, a Virtue

THANKS !

fredbrownfredbrownover 1 year ago

Heartwarming story - and "He" did indeed send him

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Short, sweet, and very romantic. A loving heart seems able to melt stone.

stewartbstewartbabout 1 year ago

Love doesn't end ... it has a life of it's own ... Nice story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

LIKED IT!

Phxray54Phxray544 months ago

No matter how many times I read this story, it gets five stars.

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