All Comments on 'Just the Beginning'

You stopped writing WAY too soon!! Just getting to the best part and you STOPPED! AWE... that's just mean! C'mon, write the rest of it!

stupid

You have got to be kidding. I would understand it if this was half a story, it isn't even half a page.

both wanted the other,so why'd you end it?

Sorry, the little disclaimer didn't end up with this. I wrote this for a guy I'm seeing as a teaser. I was hoping to get some feedback before I showed it to him. I think if it had said that it would make more sense.

Just found this story. Very well done!