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by Tearsofsorrow210/31/08

Angry

The emotions are visceral. If I knew someone like this I would end up in prison. Both children will be scared for life. A shame. Very well written story and I hope it is fiction. Because of the emotions it evokes I would say this is a great story.

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by apollona10/31/08

Hmm

Sublime.

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by Anonymous10/31/08

I agree with these!

Very well written story, in spite of the few typos. I was gripped very early and had to finish to the end. I also hope this was not based on a real event, and feel sorry for the participants if it is true.

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by Anonymous10/31/08

No offense meant

But Sons-of-BITCHES like that belong IN JAIL & ONCE THE OTHER CONS FIND OUT WHY HE'S IN THERE, HE'S A DEADMAN! There are some people even criminals WILL NOT allow to live among them! NOT ALLOW TO LIVE, PERIOD! He's 1 of them!

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by Anonymous11/01/08

SAD

Very well written. Sadly I had to stop before it got too much for me. A very sad story.

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by Anonymous11/14/08

Stunning...

Not your usual Literotica fare. A cut way above by a writer of tremendous talent and complexity.

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by Anonymous11/14/08

Stunning...

Not your usual Literotica fare. A cut way above by a writer of tremendous talent and complexity.

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by Anonymous03/31/10

Again, very well done. A very sad story. I'm sure it happens a lot.

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by Anonymous09/08/10

Not good

May be true and may often happen but reading about it is not enertainment

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by MrVdog11/27/12

Deeply touching, heartbreaking. A work of genius!

Such power in just a few words; you have a gift, foxxxie.

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