The emotions are visceral. If I knew someone like this I would end up in prison. Both children will be scared for life. A shame. Very well written story and I hope it is fiction. Because of the emotions it evokes I would say this is a great story.
Very well written story, in spite of the few typos. I was gripped very early and had to finish to the end. I also hope this was not based on a real event, and feel sorry for the participants if it is true.
But Sons-of-BITCHES like that belong IN JAIL & ONCE THE OTHER CONS FIND OUT WHY HE'S IN THERE, HE'S A DEADMAN! There are some people even criminals WILL NOT allow to live among them! NOT ALLOW TO LIVE, PERIOD! He's 1 of them!
Very well written. Sadly I had to stop before it got too much for me. A very sad story.
Not your usual Literotica fare. A cut way above by a writer of tremendous talent and complexity.
Again, very well done. A very sad story. I'm sure it happens a lot.
May be true and may often happen but reading about it is not enertainment
Such power in just a few words; you have a gift, foxxxie.
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