by Techomancer
I have really enjoyed this series, and I'm impressed by some of the inventions that Steve has come up with.
A fuck machine is always a great invention to think about , especially if you can make the machine do the work better than a human.
After all, isn't that what progress is all about? Thanks for the good chapters....Rich
You should so include some illustrations, because it seems you've mapped out some already.. (: Very well written- (as in ideas, mental pictures, and emotions between the characters)(grammer i did not pay attention to)I read every word. Definitely have some romancing of reader going on. Smitten. Completely smitten. I hope there's more..
really enjoyed this series , i sooooo wish there was more .
looked @ your profile , all posted over 5 weeks in 2008 .
i guess we are all going to be disapointed that the story does not continue.
here's hoping lots of pple send u feedback & you still have the email active.
thats proly the only way we will ever see more of steve & cindy .plus the stunning inventiveness & beauty contained within.
Something needs to be done with the drop, talk about ruining a perfect evening. A chace to be the hero, oh clever. She certainly was impressed, was it your part or all the machines part ?
Me thinks thee needs a muse, or hast thou exited this domain entirely?
This story line has me stiff! Isn't there any more coming? It is a wonderful idea, the mad inventor meets nymphomaniac... please write more!
This story is so much like me it's crazy. My wife just looks at me and she has this dreamy look in her eyes and she just melts and says I love you when I make her a new machine. She names the machines neutral man slur we're up to number 17