All Comments on 'Sam's Short Dark Tale'

I thought Heros life story was getting deeper, but it will be hard to top this. I hope we get to see how Sam starts to recover. Good idea, well up to your usual standard. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

weird - I like it, it adds depth and a bit more realism to the entire cast... you should get this stuff published.

I've been a bit bummed that this little ditty didn't get more readers and posted comments. My suspicion is that plenty of folks are skipping over it when they see it's non-erotic. That's part of the reason I called it "Sam's SHORT dark tale." Oh well. I liked it. :)

First time glance at your work - well done. Maybe do a cheating wife - same type of ending [as this one] for a story. Appreciate your efforts, author.

I was thinking that maybe the reason it gets minimal comment is not the lack of sex, but the idea that everybody thinks they already know what she did from reading the rest of the stories. I'm glad I read it but I really didn't until after I had read all the other chapters! I prefer what she did to what I had assumed she did! She didn't kill the guy, just gave him the courage to do what he wanted.

fitting, reading this adds a depth to Sam and improves the perception of her character.

It wasn't courage she gave him; rather she gave him an overdose, a bolus of despair...an utter, complete lack of hope.

Nice short stoy. It provided so very intetresting background. Thanks!

I think maybe why there isn't a lot of direct feedback is that there isn't a lot to say. She really did lose something when she finished him off like this it was cruel and unusual and shows how broken her character is after the death of Stephen. I hope there is redemption for the character. Well done well written

Good for her in a way but from what I have heard and was told vengence can leave you hollow and as or more broken some times. Before she had nothing to feel guilty for so I can see why she is up and down. I hope she finds love and peace in her heart

This sheds a lot of light on to the depth of Sam's internal problems, and it makes it seem like her relationship with Hero and Peaches is bringing her to something of a "normal" emotional state.

Whoever you used as a character model for this is someone I seriously do not want to be .... irritated with me!

Thanks for the quick incite to Sammie's past

and if she wasn't already, now, Sammy will begin to experience those long, painful moments that can last for hours where the loss is mourned and the act that was supposed to ease it - the bell that can't be unrung - is mulled... I could easily see a long shower with her huddled in the corner sobbing, though that's probably in the past. At this point, she's officially damaged and broken... but redeemable... good read...

I cant wait for the sequel when she goes on to become batman

This sounds like me. Goodness. I really connect to the ability to get into people's head and the revenge, the powerful inner darkness.

The fact that is sometimes comes out.....

This.is.awesome. Loved -though I don't feel like I should- Sam's monologue when she was with the killer guy.

That was harsh. But well deserved. Fucking asshole loser.

While you probably haven't fired a firearm yet, that's alright for newbies.

That's all I can say

J

Paco, I have a considerable amount of the stories containing these related characters to read yet.

But I can relate to the cold callousness Sam is feeling.

Maybe better than most.

And I knew, from Bobbie's Lessons, that Sam is NOT someone to mess with.

Dark, yes, but good.

Samantha... Well, simply is perfect in all her imperfections in my eyes. Not quite as feral as I expected, but that's also good.

What the fuck was supposed to have led to this point?

A little background, please. Who the hell is Samantha? Is she a character from a previous story? The site is lit-EROTICA! (Oh well, I guess an occasional clunker is inevitable.)

and "since" is wrong: it''s "sense" . the story was easy to follow, unless you need dot-to-dot. five stars!

I loved it! now that really set the tone for the "Peaches and Honey" story I loved that one as well! from an avid reader ( hmarcus2415@hotmail.com) loved it.

Meh!

Bill S.

Wow!