All Comments on 'Desconocido Pt. 01'

by Catalingus2005

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bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Good Start

I am a bit surprised that 12 years later he would be recognizable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
short

but a good beginning.

trogtedtrogtedover 15 years ago
An excellent beginning

Looking forward to subsequent chapters.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 15 years ago
HUGE massive plot hole from the get go

Kazuo has a high ranking position in a Japanese company. When he was foond by the Mexican Doctors they sent his fingerprints dental records etc out into the real world.

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According to the story since Kazuo has been to America many times and Japan is highly advanced nation the idea that both the Japs and the Americans would NOT reply AND that wouLd Both drop the ball at the same time is absurd .

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Far too short

Chapters of this length make no sense.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Interesting start

Interesting, this.might be a good.story to follow.

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