All Comments on 'Bad Day'

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

I like this. Those first few lines, down to the part about putting the milk in the cupboard, are really good. Not sure, but I think you almost give to many examples of how you're out of sorts. I'd like to read a little bit about why you're probably having a bad day.

the smartest idea so far. TK U MLJ LV NV