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Alais's Settlement Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by sjsjs02/15/09

wow

I found this story by chance and was smitten by it entirely. I found myself caring about Alais and her relationship with her husband and also wondering what, if anything, would happen between herself and Jack... and if her husband would find out...
Mysterious!
Do you intend to write another installment of this story?

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by WinkWink1912/09/09

More!! Please...

I really enjoyed all 3 chapters! :) I hope you write more soon

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by Anonymous04/15/11

more!

it's a nice story. i would really love to see a love story between jack and alais :)

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by Anonymous09/16/11

very realistic

well-written, apparently well-researched, realistic, and hot. I do like how you portray the relationship between Alais and Cynric but manage to make her attraction to Jack so palpable as well. I love it! Please write more installments!

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by Anonymous11/30/11

Wonderfullt Exciting

This series has, thus far, been wonderfully exciting. I hope that you continue writing as I am eager to find out what happens next.

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by jadeA01/11/12

Please continue!

Please come back and continue the story... They have the essence of BDSM, and I love them...

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