All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 04'

I love how you continue the story with both of them having unconfounded doubts about each other. Just don't make them take too long that they area really meant for each other.

Whoa! I was not expecting that to happen! Great story, I love the way you write and have been checking your profile everyday hoping you posted the next chapter, of course you did not dissapoint. I hope you are right and the next chapter doesnt take too long.

Keep up the good work!

...explosive writing! Keep it coming and thanks :)

We all know that he's NOT going to kill her so what's he gonna do? Kill them instead then help her claim her place? But then that would take her away. Decisions, decisions! GREAT CHAPTER!

Uh oh whats our assassin going to do... I'm really loving this series that you have writen. It is very refreshing to have a vampire assassin who actually works verses all the other vampires who seem to be magically filthy rich.

Thank you - so many of these boy meets girl stories leave that out, thought I was in a romance novel site.

I've read this several times and it's still one of the best stories on this site.

The more I read the more I know I'd love to see this on screen, it deserves it. :)

I don't know how you do it but every single chapter you write is five star worthy.