by jou_ahn
Glad to see another chapter. I kept watching for it and finally was well rewarded. Keep it going.
this is a good story. i need you to finish. Mira and Jay need to get together in Denver and continue the 3some.
Was good and exciting till you got another woman involved. That put me off. Why can't it just have stayed as cousins reunion as stated and that they managed to end up staying together was a real let down.
It's a shame that this story was never completed. Well written with good build ups. I would like to have read more.