All Comments on 'My Steam Room Fantasy'

But well written and I guess you enjoyed writing it. It just isn't my thing sorry.

It was good but a little rushed and you repeated the whole mr.right thing.

your adventure is so real that i'm with it. would like to do the steamroom next time. had a similar exp. 3 weeks ago in Baden-Baden it is just great.

would like to contact you

gup4

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hotmail

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your pic is so sexy

kisses

pit69

your adventure is so real that i'm with it. would like to do the steamroom next time. had a similar exp. 3 weeks ago in Baden-Baden it is just great.

would like to contact you

gup4

at

hotmail

com

your pic is so sexy

kisses

pit69

This story was about a FFM threesome but it became a lesbian story that wasn't cool to fool us.

My pantyhose "thing" had to take a bit of a back seat to the HOT sex, for this one! However, that's okay, at least for now. There's always, hopefully, a sequel to help make up for that.

You need to do an edit or ask someone to help you. There are transitions that need work and miss applying "tone" and "tongue" was distracting, remember "cut and paste" and "spell check" are not always your friends. Over all an enjoyable read please keep writing.

Good story, but definitely needs some editing. Too many things repeated and even though I think it was probably spell checked, some of the words are wrong. Close in spelling, but not in meaning.