All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 05'

by lil_jane34

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Anonymousover 15 years ago

I'm trying to figure out why this stuff is EROTIC

It certainly is not to me or to any of my friends most of whom are reasonably normal

digdaddyrich over 15 years ago

As far as Sci-Fi/ Fantasy goes this is good

I really think this story should have been posted as a Sci-Fi story. You have me hooked on to what or who is coming next.You may want to back off a little on the Lysergic Acid Diethylamide, but not too much. It's a great fantasy. Thanks for the good chapter.....Rich

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