All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 07'

This story needs something more to help with the erotic nature of it. It also doesn't qualify for BDSM either. It's to soft. Why don't you stop writing until you know how to write a decent story.

may we have another?

The story line is ok. but the chapters are to short. And the amount of material you have to cover will make the reader loose intrest before the story is over. you have got in to the punishment and stuff. But what about the changing of there bodies. Will they get any more shots, what does it do to them? what is happening to them as a family? Can Alice ever love Keith again or will she need more than he can give? will they ever excape is there any hope for them?

I love this story. I have had fantasies of abduction, and hypnosis....myself turned into a wimp like Keith while my wife was turned into an insatiable slut to our captors, two males and a female. In the end, she is submissive to the two men just as the female captor is, and i am sub to all of them

Your story goes way beyond my thoughts, and are giving me renewed stroking material. Keep the chapters cumming.

The stories are good.

...yes they could use an editor, but they can also be edited AFTER being submitted. Anyone who speaks out about that should also offer to edit.

Also, the BDSM crowd is tough.

Some of them seem to not like any buildup, and only go for the roughest stuff. Ignore that comment. The way your introducing the family to BDSM is terrific. Too much at once, and they would mentally crack. The anguish of the conditioning is great.

The stories are short, but do what you can manage.

Better quality over quantity.

Good work, and I look forward to the next installment.

I really like the story line but when is the next one coming? It's been almost a month and I won't be checking back for long!

excited to see more!!!! i love the stories so far. can't wait to see where it goes!

it hurts so good

All chapter interesting but was wondering why you just ended it. Should have been

wrapped up.

This is a great start i hope to read more of this story soon.

Where is the rest of the store? I want more!!!!!!!

Please continue this is so good!